tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-548248685729133691.post372497660132037678..comments2024-01-17T13:16:10.378-08:00Comments on Joseph4GI: Jewish LGBT Leaders Against SF Circ Ban - Ignorance or Hypocrisy?Josephhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14190648498809795551noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-548248685729133691.post-83794694626859364542011-06-25T17:17:27.801-07:002011-06-25T17:17:27.801-07:00Joseph: excellent point by point response to the s...Joseph: excellent point by point response to the surprisingly feeble stance taken by these so called "leaders". Not being able to see genital integrity as an issue of sexual-self determination is certainly an expression of hypocrisy on their part.<br /><br />-AlexAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-548248685729133691.post-59815200757518962312011-06-17T02:25:07.265-07:002011-06-17T02:25:07.265-07:00Hey Tom, thank you for your readership.
I am by n...Hey Tom, thank you for your readership.<br /><br />I am by no means an English major, and I'm barely just starting out as a blogger, so I welcome any suggestions, criticism and pointers.<br /><br />Thanks for the suggestions! I've made the changes.<br /><br />~JosephJosephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14190648498809795551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-548248685729133691.post-57488072116521303192011-06-16T23:17:20.364-07:002011-06-16T23:17:20.364-07:00Joseph, we can always count on you to deconstruct ...Joseph, we can always count on you to deconstruct the situation into its logical facets. Thanks!<br /><br />One textual criticism: I beg of you, please change 'Which <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Begging_the_question" rel="nofollow">begs the question</a>' to 'Which raises the question'.<br /><br />One content suggestion would be to add qualifications akin to thee following bold text: "Are they climbing out of their cribs, <b>traveling to sub-Saharan Africa where HIV rates are 20 to 40 times higher than in the U.S.</b> and engaging in risky sexual behavior?"<br /><br />It might also be worthwhile to somehow list those African countries where the circumcised population has a higher incidence of HIV; whenever HIV is mentioned, it must always be associated with the fact that the studies don't seem to pan out practically and that they cover third-word sub-Saharan Africa.Tom Riddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12994425531096864789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-548248685729133691.post-74953438170674321402011-06-16T18:47:28.595-07:002011-06-16T18:47:28.595-07:00Excellent post once again Joseph. The ending is ve...Excellent post once again Joseph. The ending is very effective.Bonobo3Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05937870574691578171noreply@blogger.com